Almost like Austen

My journey in writing my first novel.

Writing, like with words…

Posted by bukarella on February 4, 2010

Words intrigue me, I can taste and smell my favorites; they have color and life, and I hope they don’t annoy the reader. I have to be careful not to overuse some of them: BEAST, QUITE, CREATURE, UGLY, SCARLET, BURLY, CRACK, ROAR, THICKET, DELIGHT, POUR, PERL, BERRY, PLETHORA, FASCINATE.

I pull up on-line thesaurus quite a bit,  if I’m not sure of the meaning, I double-check with a regular dictionary. English is my second language, after all. To my shame, I have to admit that I am not at all confident with articles, as my native tongue doesn’t have them. At all. Not even one. One of my secret fears is that no agent will want to deal with a manuscript filled with misused articles. *sigh*

We’ll have to wait to find out.

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Evolving Manuscript

Posted by bukarella on February 3, 2010

Every day my characters become a little bit more real, unanswered questions are cleared away one by one, the adventure is taking shape with all the right peaks and falls.

Up until the last week, I had a problem: I still did not have a very solid excuse for Lily Rua to be walking across the island on the quest to save Little Prince. He’s a lovable little boy,alright, but why would she care? Well, I have answered this very important question.

Up until this past weekend, my party seemed incomplete. Now, it feels right!

Up until last Friday, I did not have a well-defined backstory for my little Danko. Now, I am very clear on his parents (mother, at least), his upbringing, and his ailments.

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Still to discover: Renoi’s story, a twist in the midpoint (my gut is telling me something is missing there), the details on the villain.

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Inserting New Characters

Posted by bukarella on February 2, 2010

So, 40K into the manuscript, most of the chapters outlined, and NOW I find the need to expand my group of three into a group of five. The thing is, I’m falling in love with foxes, and while it’s a minor thing, my party just grew by two members, and both said  members have red tails.

In a way it’s a tribute to Saint Exupery.  It’s also satisfying the gut feeling I’ve had for a while now that  ”something is missing”.  At the same time, it helps me with resolving one of the logistics in the story. It surely will be a pain to go through 20 chapters and give a place to my new friends, but I feel it’s a right thing to do.

There.

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Reflections: January 2010

Posted by bukarella on February 1, 2010

Writing: reopened my draft, added to the outline, added 2,000 words to the main manuscript. Some work is done on the background for prince Danko and a whole chapter on staying at the Baji Tower.

Blogging: 12 posts

Writing Community: reconnected with Absolute Write Water Cooler , found several interesting blogs by new writers.

General feeling of accomplishment: Feeling back in business. Determined.

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Twisting fantasy expectations?

Posted by bukarella on January 30, 2010

If you were to meet a unicorn, you would have a layer of expectations: looks like a white horse, pure and wise. What would you say if it turned out to be green and stupid?
If you were to meet a mermaid, you would expect her to be young, enchanting, beautiful. What if were an old hag?
If you were to meet a chimera, you would expect an ugly, savage beast. What if it turned out to be a sweet, lonely, misunderstood creature?

I’m not saying that’s what you will find in my manuscript, but I am making a conscious effort to climb out of a traditional box. What can I say, good luck to me!

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If I could pick a cover for my novel…

Posted by bukarella on January 29, 2010

I know that a writer has little to no control over the cover art for their work, but if I did have a say, the cover for my novel would be drawn or painted, no photos.

Ideas for the cover art:

* An open pouch laying on its side, and three scarlet runes with gold symbols spilled on a grey rock. Grey backdrop.

* Hind legs and a tail of a sleeping chimera, and a shadow of a little boy in a distance. Dark backdrop.

* A branch of a gem tree covered in crystals with a heavy ruby hanging off of it. Either white or black backdrop.

* Ruins. Mosaic walls with chipped images of birds and flowers, and a “shaolin” monk crouching with a staff in his hands.

There you have it!

I’m not bad at painting and drawing, but all my energy is diverted to writing at the moment. I would love for someone to take this on as a little project, just because.

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On Writing Dialogue…

Posted by bukarella on January 28, 2010

I am struggling with dialogue. I am always on the look out for great tips on writing dialogue, and I am starting to organize my thoughts on this subject. I try to keep myself in check, and I strive to have one of the following three reason for the dialogue to occure:

#1. To advance the plot

#2. To advance the relationship between characters

#3. To advance the relationship between the reader and the character

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Once I establish the purpose, I have to deliver, right? Right. It’s harder than it sounds. Once I’m done with a scene, I reread it and edit it for these three points:

#1. The context: if my characters are talking, it doesn’t mean that they are sitting still in their chairs. They might be walking, picking up dropped pine-cones, flipping through a book of spells, scratching their elbow, etc. This means I always keep in mind the backdrop for the dialogue that you are going to read. If I don’t feel like working on the backdrop – I just make quick notes to myself *add holding hands and cooking dinner*.

#2. The realism: the truth is, if you listen to the conversations that people are having on the streets, in the parks, and at the stores – you will notice that they are not at all smooth-flowing. Some conversations are choppy, and others are too boring. People don’t always answer each other’s questions, they don’t speak in complete sentences, they jump from one subject to another, and some of it simply makes you yawn. Finding the balance between realism and entertainment is not easy, but rereading out loud sure helps.

#3. Voice and word choice: I aim to maintain a pattern of speech consistent with each character without overdoing it. This is probably the hardest one for me.

It all comes down to my ultimate goal – creating a dialogue that the reader will believe and enjoy. How does one achieve such perfection? I would assume through a little bit of talent and a lot of practice. I’m not so sure I possess the first one, so I’m off to do the latter.

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For the neurotic aspiring writers: Do you ever?…

Posted by bukarella on January 18, 2010

As a new writer, I often feel alone and conflicted: “Am I doing it right? Does anyone else ever do this? Am I delusional to think this will work?” Yet, the more I pay attention, the more I realize others are asking themselves the very same questions I do!  Wouldn’t it be nice to know you are in good company? The point I’m trying to make here – if you find yourself questioning your process – that makes two of us!

* Do you ever work on multiple manuscripts at a time?

Sure do. In fact, I think most writers do. I have two projects going at the moment (hint, they are listed in the GOALS section on the left). New ideas still intrude on my time, once in a while, but I simply create a folder for them, and set them aside . It is my understanding that as long as you can discipline yourself to make progress, it doesn’t matter how many manuscripts you are running.

* Do you ever skip around?

That’s the only way I know how to work. Apparently, I can’t follow intended sequence of events. If I’m working on the chapter that needs a dialogue, but I feel compelled to work on the description, I just make notes *insert a dialogue about…*, and move on. Sometimes I skip whole chapters, again, leaving myself notes *Chapter 11 – meeting with Dodo birds*.

* Do you ever write while doing something else?

80% of the time. I’ve stopped thinking of it as a bad thing. As long as I’m making progress, it’s all good. There are days I need a quiet room to get anything done, and then there are days when I have my TV running, and browsing Facebook while typing only once sentence at a time.

* Do you ever work on a story without knowing the ending?

Yup. I have an idea for the Dragonfly Island, but it is not set in stone. I just know that my conflicts needs resolution, and there aren’t that many choices: “He either does, or he doesn’t”, and “they either do, or they don’t”.

* Do you ever go for a long time without touching your manuscript and then pick it up months later?

Well, if you were following this blog, you know that I just came out of 6 months break. It just took me a couple of days to pick it up where I left off.

* Do you ever feel shy about sharing your writing with others?

Hillarious, I know: I want to be a published writer, yet I feel mortified having to share my writing. I did promise my significant other the first read, but that’s it. At the same time, I don’t mind posting short excerpts on the blog, or getting advice on AW Forum. The feedback I get is extremely helpful.

* Do you ever doubt your skill?

All. The. Time.

* Do you ever think your plot is no good? cheesy? boring?

I do. I simply try not to dwell on it, or I’ll never finish.

* Do you ever dream about being published?

I’m not without an ambition. I very much hope to find an agent, get a deal, and have a faithful following of readers.

* Do you ever set writing goals that you don’t meet?

According to my first schedule, I should have been done writing, rewriting AND editing, both manuscripts I started last year. I’ve learned to let go, and the only thing that matters is the answer to the following question: Am I making progress? I still set goals, make deadlines, and strive to stick to the intended word count, but I have learned to be more reasonable with my demands of myself.

* Do you work on your query and research agents even though your manuscript is far from finished?

Ok, I confess, I do that. But I do try to keep myself in check – how much time do I spend on writing vs. looking for ant agent? I am very aware of the fact that unless I finish my project(s), I will never have a need to send out that polished query to my perfect agent.

* Do you ever feel alone?

Sometimes. No one else, I know in real life, writes. However, I feel lucky to have access to the on-line community of writers. You know, the kind that reads this blog.


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One chapter at a time: the process.

Posted by bukarella on January 15, 2010

Today, I’m reflecting on the process of unwrapping a chapter.

About 2/3 into my manuscript, and I realized that my characters came upon a lonely tower in the middle of a meadow. At that point, I did not know who or what lived in the tower, or even if it was abandoned. I did not know if it was there to keep a secret or simply to provide shelter.

I did have a calm feeling about it, and did not expect anything too scary or dramatic to show up. When one of the characters opened the old door, I walked in right behind him, and took notice of what I saw: shelves with jars and bottles all around the walls, a stove, wooden trunks, a spiral staircase, light coming from a room all the way upstairs.

Who would live in such a place? Well, it must have been an odd character, a hermit. And a hermit it was! What did he do with the jars? He said he stored potions, and foods, and spells inside them. The travelers spend a night there, and the hermit cooked for them a marvelous dinner (I enjoy writing about food, especially when I am hungry myself). The hearty stew came out mouthwatering! Although, if you think about the long day that my travelers had, it is no surprise that little Danko fell asleep before he took a bite.

Did I mention that my hermit had two pet foxes? I knew something was missing, a detail was escaping me. And then I realized it: my hermit seemed too lonely in that lonely tower of his. While doing some reading on Japanese folklore, I came upon a deity that had two foxes. Sweet and powerful image stuck in my mind, and just the right kind of companions for my hermit revealed themselves!

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Writing Fantasy: hairless vampire monkeys love cucumbers.

Posted by bukarella on January 14, 2010

          I have a new favorite creature in my book – it’s called Kappa. After doing some research on Japanese mythology, I came across these hairless monkey-like “somethings” that love human blood and cucumbers. They live in the water (which is perfect for one of the chapters I got stuck on), and to top it all off, apparently, they are very polite and speak fluent Japanese. Talk about inspirations! I’m in love…

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